After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
• Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
• Express your appreciation
• And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
Dear Sir,
My name is Ben Ray and I am the person you rescued from the ghastly motor accident that occurred along Bridge - Whitford expressway on Wednesday, 23rd of December, 2018. I am writing to express my sincere appreciation to you.
I would like to thank you for taking care of me on that fateful day. I would have died if you were not at the scene of the accident. Thank you for driving me to the nearest hospital, ensuring I was promptly attended to and paying my hospital bills when the medical officials refused to treat me because I do not have any insurance, I am sincerely grateful.
I want to use this opportunity to invite you and your family to my home. I would like you to meet my loved ones too and have dinner with us. We will be expecting you at our house which is located at 12, Brown Avenue, Thamesmead, on the 7th of January, 2019.
I look forward to seeing you.
Yours faithfully,
ben ray
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'December 2018'.
Suggestion: December 2018
...itford expressway on Wednesday, 23rd of December, 2018. I am writing to express my sincere app...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...express my sincere appreciation to you. I would like to thank you for taking car...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... taking care of me on that fateful day. I would have died if you were not at the ...
^
Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...any insurance, I am sincerely grateful. I want to use this opportunity to invite...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'January 2019'.
Suggestion: January 2019
...Brown Avenue, Thamesmead, on the 7th of January, 2019. I look forward to seeing you. Y...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ard to seeing you. Yours faithfully, ben ray
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 757.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4269005848 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4943622207 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643274853801 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4895113007 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.7 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278386384928 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130099580219 0.0766984524023 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655621822064 0.0603063233224 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170383463446 0.12726935374 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194411460606 0.0580467560999 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 8.71597938144 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.