Information revolution has changed the way of mass communications and
had some negative and positive effects on individual lives as well as on
society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The importance of modern inventions in today’s world, which was always debatable, has now become more controversial. The substantial influence of computers, antibiotic and airplanes has sparked the controversy over the potential impact of this trend on human life in recent years. It can be asserted that the inception of computers is definitely the greatest invention over the decades. The essay will elaborate how computers afford a myriad of advantages to almost fields and how they contribute to the invention of antibiotic and airplane and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
At the outset, there are numerous reasons why a computer is definitely the greatest invention until today, but the most conspicuous one stems from the fact that computers have become part and parcel of any fields in an economy such as industry and finance, which have greatly increased productivity. As an illustration, most people now find computers indispensable, especially in terms of big business and industry, computerized manufacturing and automated assembly lines have tremendously engendered production. In addition, computers also help people communicate more easily regardless of their location. Thus, the computer is undeniably the most salient invention which brings about impressively positive change for human life.
Nevertheless, the advent of antibiotic and aeroplane is also remarkable, which cannot be neglected. For example, antibiotic helps to snatch millions of people from the jaws of death every year, and airplane has made the dream of flying a reality, which can help people travel abroad within few hours and contribute significantly to the development of commodity transportation. However, such inventions could not succeed without the involvement of computers, as most experiments on antibiotic and airplane need to be analyzed and summarized on computers.
From what has been discussed above, it can be concluded that computers have continuously contributed to the development of mankind, thus they are absolutely the most salient invention.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, thus, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.5418719212 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 8.36945812808 167% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 20.9802955665 43% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 31.9359605911 132% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.75862068966 295% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1755.0 1207.87684729 145% => OK
No of words: 311.0 242.827586207 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.64308681672 5.00649968141 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 3.92707691288 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19111705327 2.71678728327 117% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 139.433497537 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572347266881 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 379.143842365 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.5024630542 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.839973953 50.4703680194 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.25 104.977214359 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.9669160288 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0210369212143 0.242375264174 9% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0100220067187 0.0925447433944 11% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0188869870383 0.071462118173 26% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0141563618588 0.151781067708 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143144730137 0.0609392437508 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 12.6369458128 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 53.1260098522 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.9458128079 141% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 11.5310837438 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.3980295567 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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