Some people encourage young children to leave their parents house as soon as they become adults while other say children should stay at their parents house as long as possible.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Family traditions vary from countries to countries, in some regions, it is common to see that young adults start to live independently once they reach the age of 18, and parents from other nations prefer to keep their offspring for a longer time. I believe that living without parents during adulthood is a better solution for young citizens.
To begin with, there is no doubt that sharing a house or an apartment with parents brings multiple benefits to the young generation as well as the families. For example, if young children can save the money from renting an accommodation, they can spend this amount of wealth on other meaningful things, such as attending tertiary education. In addition, living with parent is advantageous to family relationship, compared to people who live alone; those who can meet and talk with their parents on a daily basis have a stronger family connection.
On the other hand, renting a place and living by himself is a great opportunity for young people to gain responsibility and practical skills, as they have to be accountable for their rent, utility bills and other chores in their life, therefore, they can become more sophisticated in their future life. Also, having their own space can help young people reach their potential, as most parents have strict roles in the family, such no loud music at night, which hinders them from engaging in their hobbies.
In conclusion, it is true that being taken care by parents can reduce young adults’ financial burden and enhance their family bond. However, living alone can enable young people to become mature more quickly and allow them to do what they are really passionate about. Hence, I encourage young people to live without the help from their family.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, however, if, really, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00341296928 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5919428902 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576791808874 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.3624509944 49.4020404114 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.6 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.3 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.1 7.06120827912 242% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292273588508 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122430105208 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033880863677 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184521097616 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251938008308 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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