Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Nowadays, it is believed by many that the proliferation of online communities has caused severe personal problems as well as societal issues. From my perspective I completely agree that this tendency is harmful to both of them. In this essay, I will use examples from individual people and the public to explain my point of view.
To begin with, socializing online harms people’s well-being, as emotions and feelings cannot be directly translated by typing words on social media; therefore people who frequently use online social websites often feel lonely and isolated. In addition, this development also hurts family bond, because family members are prone to spend more time on online activities rather than communicating with their families in person. Moreover, online social platforms pose a threat to people’s privacy, for example, illegal hackers could take advantage of the bugs in social websites to steal netizens’ personal information.
On the other hand, social stability is under the threat of social websites, as individuals are free to post any kind of contents and false news and misleading information can result in social unrest. Also, the online society has caused the decline in some traditional industries such as newspaper and magazines businesses, which adversely affects the economic growth. Furthermore, it also put extra financial burden on the authority, as the government has to allocate extra funds to establish an Internet regulation department to keep cyber communities healthy.
To sum up, due to the problems in relation to well-being and privacy of people and the uncertainties in future society development, I concur that social networking sites have had tremendous detrimental effects on both individual citizens and society as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in addition, kind of, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53623188406 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01724372803 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.3707785216 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.8 106.682146367 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.6 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.0 7.06120827912 227% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192257714958 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684475372935 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535470530579 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116302686884 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485792990714 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.5 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.18 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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