The reading cliams that imposing high taxes on cigarettes amd other unhealthy food have a number of benefits and provides three reasons of support. However the professor explains that the supporting reasons can be challenged and present some evidence to refute all supporting reasons
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The article discusses that by raising taxes on cigaretts people leads to buy ferwer of them. On contarary, the speaker underline the fact that by increasing of cigrrates price, some people start to buy cheap cigrrates that have more harmfull substance consequently, they will expose to more healthy threaten.
Furthermore, The reading passage argues that, this kind of taxes are fiancially fair becasue those people who smoke or eat unhealthy foods, create medical costs. Conversly, the speaker cliams that it is not fair in many ways. She brings up an example of two people that one have high income and other one low income and both smook a pack of ciggrates everyday. Accordding to speaker, taxes for the poor man is high compare to the rich man. So it is a burden for the man with lower income.
Finally, the auther asserts that taxes on cigrarettes significantly increased gavernmet revenue. However, the professor bringup the idea that this issue has downside. Govermment become more depond on this revenue and do not want to lose this money resource. So government is not trying to use policies that eleminate this income and that is why they don not forbbiden smoking in public area or even privates.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 149, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... and provides three reasons of support. However the professor explains that the support...
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Suggestion: .
...idence to refute all supporting reasons . The article discusses that by raising ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t that by increasing of cigrrates price, some people start to buy cheap cigrrates...
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Line 5, column 352, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...come and both smook a pack of ciggrates everyday. Accordding to speaker, taxes for the p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, furthermore, however, if, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1258.0 1373.03311258 92% => OK
No of words: 248.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07258064516 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59052644162 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 145.348785872 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620967741935 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1068992001 49.2860985944 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7692307692 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 21.698381199 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 7.06452816374 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.3589403974 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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