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We are living in the 21st century, which is full of opportunities and growth. The desire to achieve better had lead to the development of new products and services. We now have so many options before us to make our final choices. This progress has both sides, positive and negative which is applicable for both consumers as well as producers or retailers.
Firstly, the buying power of a consumer has been treated as the top priority of any firm. Every company decides the end product based on the customer's needs and desires. Secondly, Customer satisfaction is the major goal of any product line of a company and to achieve this they all battle for the best after-sales services, which in turn help the consumer to have all buying power in his hand. Lastly, this type of competition in the market help reduce the prices, thus helping the person to select good quality at an affordable price. Hence, we can say that having multiple options to chose from is in benefit of consumers.
On the flip side, because of the huge competition in the market, small scale industries are getting shut day by day, as they are unable to sustain in the war with the big multinational giants. This is considered a threat to the local businesses, which is affecting many families in small towns. However, from a customer point of view, having too many choices is not always good. Research says if a person is given two options to select from, the time taken to complete this task is generally half compared to four options. Some companies take advantages of this confusion and don't disclose all their clauses, which later on consumer regret. In addition to this, because of the too many options available in the market, one can see duplication as well, which is a nightmare for the retailer as well for the consumer. So, we can not deny the fact that having too much to chose from is not always good.
To sum up the above discussion, we can say that having a number of options to make the final purchase is good and bad as well. It is the customer who needs to be careful while going through the selection procedure so that he can take full benefit of this scenario.
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 73
- Modern children are suffered from the diseases that were once considered to be meant for adults only. Obesity is a major disease prevalent in children. What are its causes and what solution can be offered ? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 322, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
... which is applicable for both consumers as well as producers or retailers. Firstly, th...
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Line 6, column 577, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s take advantages of this confusion and dont disclose all their clauses, which later...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1787.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 385.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64155844156 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4296068528 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51148013481 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54025974026 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 559.8 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2259135813 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.2777777778 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3888888889 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159514722391 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532741626572 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446269249334 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980742645126 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371926223391 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.