Dear Claire,
Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to you regarding a job in France.
Recently I have found an advertisement online about a new company named V.U.T. It is a startup company which is going to produce and develop new games for teenagers. Moreover, there is a vacancy of graphic designer and I instantly remembered how much you like designing and creating video game characters. As I understand, the job involves working in the office among other workers, create new designs for games and take part in various conferences.
Undoubtedly, this job is quite suitable for you. I think you are very creative, open-minded and hard-working person. Additionally it has always been your dream to work on something connected to the world of video games. Furthermore, you would be able to come up with your own characters and implement them into a game, as it says in the advertisement.
I believe, it is very easy to apply for the job. The company has a website which you can visit at any moment and attach your CV on the job portal. Therefore, if the company likes your CV, they will schedule an interview as per your availability.
I look forward to hearing from about the job update.
Best wishes,
Jane
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 118, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...e, open-minded and hard-working person. Additionally it has always been your dream to work o...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79342723005 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8114030846 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.652582159624 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9747144414 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.9285714286 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2142857143 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39435106026 0.216113520407 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131120037844 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0854011943374 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215878818665 0.12726935374 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100474146913 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.91 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.