Teachers' salaries should be based on their students' academic performance.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
Education system is greatly dependent on the teacher involved in it. Without the good amount of education the overall development of the nation as a whole will be far from reach of it and teacher is the charioteer of the education system. So, a nation cannot develop without the shrewd faculty available in the system. I firmly disagree with the claim that the teacher's salary should depend on the student's performance. The teaching system can deteriorate with such arguments becoming law as the teacher would feel abjectness about the low pay even though they are not all complete fault.
The argument, if implemented, would tend the teacher to leave the profession and join any other secure job because for a person to survive financial security is of utmost importance. In all of this , the biggest proportion of loss would be incurred by the system itself. What can a teacher do at best is to acquaint the student with the concept and ask if they were able understand it and if the student messes up in the exam even after the full efforts of the teacher, it's the student at fault not the teacher.So teacher must not be the culprit in such cases and for sure , there must be fixed salary for the teachers.
The teacher - student relationship is like the farmer-crop . A farmer can at best use proper fertilizers and irrigation facilities but if the seeds doesn't grow into the plant, due to some calamity then farmer cannot be held responsible for the problem. Similarly, the teacher does what it knows best but the examination of the student cannot be taken into consideration for defining the efforts put in by the teacher. If a teacher makes full effort and gets paid nothing due to the student's fault, the teacher might get abjectness towards the system and the loss would be incurred by the nation itself.
There can certain benefits also in some cases if that argument is implemented. If a teacher is under some pressure of the results of the student, they might be far more interested that the student studies well and performs well. The teacher would be fully engrossed in the teaching and it could lead fruitful result in some cases where the teachers are very lethargic and phlegmatic about the student's education.
There are certain benefits of this claim but the disadvantages of the claim are much more deleterious than any of the advantages provided. So, I conclude that the Teacher is the main resource of Education System thus they shouldn't be denied of the respect and the financial security they deserve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, similarly, so, then, thus, well, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 12.4196629213 153% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 58.6224719101 89% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2099.0 2235.4752809 94% => OK
No of words: 435.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82528735632 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56690854021 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61214352152 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 215.323595506 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475862068966 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 644.4 704.065955056 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.3140653282 60.3974514979 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.470588235 118.986275619 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5882352941 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58823529412 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200674732578 0.243740707755 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755932798504 0.0831039109588 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622812263364 0.0758088955206 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120132206106 0.150359130593 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271865558856 0.0667264976115 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 14.1392134831 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.1639044944 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.38706741573 98% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 100.480337079 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.