Rich countries should not employ skilled labour from poor countries as the poor countries need the workers more to what extent do you agree or disagree
The trend of migrating intelligence people themselvess in developed Nations for job purpose is gaining Momentum.however boosted economic Nation should not hire such a brain drain person as developing Nation required more of such types of employees.i partially agree with this perspective and my reason for agreement will be analysing following
Admittely,independence of people and product is Hallmark of globalisation. it is obvious people go in search of better employment education and good Lifestyle. as it is a right of each and individual to live with Freedom in fact highly professional annual worker fosters themselves to migrate in greenery area for instance Sundar Pichai CEO of Google a well qualified person graduate from IIT Roorkee in India but work in USA as he has gets handsome salary and good accomodation from host country moreover in developing countries they may not get expected job salary as per their qualification.
On other hand however some developing countries deprivrd from highly educated person or a worker.as they needed more such people to boosted the economy. In fact government expect return from the investment done in education and other facilities. to illustrate that Abdul Kalam scientist from India and work in India only just because he wanted to gift something to humanity of home country only.although,he get tremendous offers from different countries.furthermore,poor countries have to contribute in terms of money for brain drain person what is more,people of poor country have to work in own Nation as skilled worker is required there only.
To winding a Brain drain encourage million of people to work in a wide range of green area.despite this,developing Nation required such a skilled worker and high professional person
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, for instance, in fact, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37769784173 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40531989872 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58273381295 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.108178993 49.4020404114 298% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 213.571428571 106.682146367 200% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.7142857143 20.7667163134 191% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244665120996 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107110716847 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0929425279689 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130382501624 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111252437043 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.0946893788 182% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 23.43 50.2224549098 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.52 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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