The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in Newzealand in 2003 and 2013.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts illustrate us the proportion of sales done in retail sectors through online shopping between the year 2003 and 2013 in Newzealand.
In the year 2003, travel accounted for 36 % which experienced a slight drop to 29% in the year 2013. Despite this decrease, it was still had the highest percentage of sales as compared to other sectors. For movies and songs category, the proportion was nearly a -fifth in the year 2003 which accelerated to one-third in the year 2013.
In contrast, clothes sale plummeted by 8 % from 24 % to 16 % in the year (2003-2013). While there was a minimal upward shift in the trend of sales in books by 3% ranging from 19% to 21% in the year 2003 and 2013 respectively.
Overall, the largest contributor of sales in all the given years was made up by travel and entertainment categories, whereas books and clothes amounted as the least proportion of sales.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, third, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77564102564 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74196980974 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 203.4 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2129394714 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.428571429 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 22.9334400587 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.71428571429 5.23603664747 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189041896507 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103114577523 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850412116178 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13619828366 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100364471534 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.