The claim that animal have "rights" has been the subject of much debate since the 1970s. Are zoos helping or hurting our animals? should zoos be banned? do you agree or disagree?
The claim of animal rights has been the subject of debate which is now more controversial as zoos are the places, where animals feel safe and secure. Zoos are like home for them. Most of people go there to see different types of animals.So, It can be agreed that zoos helping the animals. But, I am totally disagree with statement about banning the zoos This essay will eleborate how it helps and why these are not banned as well as this will lead to a conclusion.
To begin with, there are many zoos in our country that are saves their life by providing them good space, food. In the zoo, different types of animals are divided into their categories. so, according to their categories they have to provided them different areas so they feel that they are at their own home. They have freedom to go anywhere in their place.
Moreover, in the zoos, they take care the animals as well as they provided regular treatment to them. so, they remain healthy. They provided them training to entertain the masses as well as not to hurt them furthermore, if zoos are banned in our country then there are thousands of animals and birds who will become homeless and animals, who are wild are more dangerous and harmful for the normal folks.
At last, what has been discussed above, it can be conducted that the zoos are useful and helpful for not only animals as well as for humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well, as for, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 20.9802955665 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 31.9359605911 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 1207.87684729 94% => OK
No of words: 248.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56451612903 5.00649968141 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26823745332 2.71678728327 83% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54435483871 0.580463131201 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 357.3 379.143842365 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.8623690045 50.4703680194 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 104.977214359 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.25397266985 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.33497536946 131% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272594083012 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104332773169 0.0925447433944 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077340022875 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172984729925 0.151781067708 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890011642425 0.0609392437508 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 12.6369458128 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 53.1260098522 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.5310837438 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.32886699507 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 55.0591133005 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.