Social medias like Facebook, twitters and others have made it possible to establish communication with a wider section of people,all over the world. How has it affected human relationships?
In this age and time, due to a lot of technological improvements, mass communication has become inevitable part of life. social media plays a very crucial role in such global interaction between people. this makes people gather information in a fraction of time even from any corner of the world. but, this huge craze on virtualization has made people sterile without forming real human bondages. this essay talks about some of the reasons for the addiction and methods to resolve this to make a good relationship with people in real life.
First and foremost, the major problem in usage of social media is, people gets interested in bothering about others' life, rather than concentrating on their own life. The curiosity of knowing about the updates of others has made an individual to engage in virtual world and this makes them waste hours of time without any restrictions. Secondly, some of the news or information shared in social media are hoax and most of the rumours spread rapidly than an actual information.
In addition to that, the craze for likes or comments on their posts in such platforms, makes them to get addicted to those areas for hours affecting even their mental activities as well. this huge addiction to virtual world, has created a problem of making a bondage with people in their close circle.
but, the other facts also need to be considered that these social media have made a good communication with the people who are far away. also, this has made communication possible with all sorts of people at any time across the world and helps them in knowing things easier through information shared in those platforms. hence it is individual's responsibility to be in control of such social media to maintain smooth relationships with people nearby.
Taking everything into consideration, social medias plays a great role in this millenial age and creates an evolution of its own kind and becomes an inevitable part of the life. it is always the responsibility of an individual to handle these media in control to avoid any relationship problems at later stage. hence, handling such platforms is always in an individual's control but not on the social media for a better relationships with people around.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, well, as for, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 6.10837438424 16% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 31.9359605911 216% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 15.0 5.75862068966 260% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1867.0 1207.87684729 155% => OK
No of words: 374.0 242.827586207 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99197860963 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 3.92707691288 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81222543787 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497326203209 0.580463131201 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 379.143842365 155% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8534211029 50.4703680194 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.6875 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.375 20.9669160288 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.25397266985 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.33497536946 281% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217387757231 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0802874078094 0.0925447433944 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456436247968 0.071462118173 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127177572801 0.151781067708 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595707982081 0.0609392437508 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 55.0591133005 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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