People argue whether it is hard work or luck that contributes to success. What is your opinion?
To begin with, Hard work is closely knitted with many tiny things such as, continues learning, proper planning, dedication, time-management and mainly consistency. Success is always associated with these qualities but not merely a luck. For example, Edison's great invention of light came through several hard works, setbacks, failures and consistent effort throughout his discovery. He proudly said that, he had learned 10,000 different ways of not doing it' after his final great invention after several failed attempts.
On the other hand, Luck only plays a small role in any journey towards success. We heard only a very few achievers with only luck as a soul factor. Luck will not help one in gaining learning, character building and experience as hard-work does with a person through his journey towards success. We are getting paid by our employer only for our work not for luck. Anything that comes without hard-work will not sustain for a long. Journey towards success through this will not build character and consistency than the former one.
To conclude, Hard-work is the main factor which contributes to success. Hence the consistent effort really plays a key role and a salt of person's success with a little or no luck in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, really, so, for example, in fact, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.5418719212 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 5.94088669951 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1040.0 1207.87684729 86% => OK
No of words: 204.0 242.827586207 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09803921569 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.92707691288 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60776942252 2.71678728327 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 139.433497537 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.580463131201 110% => OK
syllable_count: 298.8 379.143842365 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.3600527903 50.4703680194 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 104.977214359 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58333333333 7.25397266985 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220358778165 0.242375264174 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.094972118759 0.0925447433944 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684322397834 0.071462118173 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165164421815 0.151781067708 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0557768932002 0.0609392437508 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 12.6369458128 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 53.1260098522 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.9458128079 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.32886699507 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 55.0591133005 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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