You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel.In your letter
say where you think you left the papers
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do /her
Dear Sir,
I am writing you here to draw your attention on my stay at your hotel last weekend, Jan 25th-26th. I was in a rush while I was checking off at the reception because of the last-minute changes on the flight schedule. As a result, I think I have left one important document on the desk during the time I was paying rest of the booking fees.
I have realized I have lost the envelope when I was in the airport. So I did not have any chance to comeback. this paper is very sensitive as it is the main copy of the car insurance I have bought at the beginning of this month. I cannot get any replacement of this paper as I have done the purchase from a different country and I am still waiting for the sea shipment to arrive. I will need this original copy to arrange the customs declaration as soon as possible. Therefore, I sincerely request you to look for the document in front desk area, as well as in the business suit I was living. The room number of the suit I was staying is 120, secound last from grand dining hall. please note that the envelope is in dark brown color and my name is written on the right corner.
please consider to place a mail to my address if you find the document.
Thanking you,
Shahla
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing you here to draw your atten...
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Line 3, column 340, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I was paying rest of the booking fees. I have realized I have lost the envelope...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 98, Rule ID: TO_COMEBACK[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to come back'?
Suggestion: to come back
...e airport. So I did not have any chance to comeback. this paper is very sensitive as it is ...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
... I did not have any chance to comeback. this paper is very sensitive as it is the ma...
^^^^
Line 5, column 427, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'customs'' or 'custom's'?
Suggestion: customs'; custom's
... need this original copy to arrange the customs declaration as soon as possible. Theref...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 681, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...0, secound last from grand dining hall. please note that the envelope is in dark brown...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 778, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my name is written on the right corner. please consider to place a mail to my ad...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Please
...me is written on the right corner. please consider to place a mail to my address ...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to my address if you find the document. Thanking you, Shahla
^^^^^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou find the document. Thanking you, Shahla
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, therefore, well, while, i think, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1001.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24152542373 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41337646303 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572033898305 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.6857404666 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195698792157 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694945139649 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790514916285 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133186590064 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542177269646 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.