The diagram shows the reproduction and growth of a honey bee.
On the whole, the average life span of a honey bee ranges from thirty four to thirty six days. In the one month of existence, the insect goes through birth, growth, maturity and procreation in addition to, moulting.
To begin with, fully grown females lay at least one or two eggs every once in three days. The gestation period for these is about ten days whereupon they hatch. Next comes the nymph , that is newborn and immature. Now begins its ongoing growth cycle. Around five days later, the nymph becomes larger and sheds its skin, feathers and hair to develop anew. This process is called moulting and is repetitive in the lives of honey bees.
The budding insect retains the new growth for about a week, only to undergo its second level of moulting. Furthermore, the nymph grows larger in size. Finally, it balloons in the next nine days and also undergoes the abovementioned phenomenon. Around this time, it emerges as a young adult. The next four days witnesses its transformation from a youngster to an adult as part of its maturing process. Post completion , the nymph becomes a bee that is ready to breed and multiply.
- A close friend is coming to visit you he/she has asked you for advice for things to do in your hometown and the surrounding area.- Write a letter to your friend . In your letter ask more details about your friend's plans.- Suggest some places to visit and 52
- Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects, while others claim that students should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find interesting. Discuss both views and give your opinion? 84
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. 67
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the honey bee 78
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the production of the Silk Cloth. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ereupon they hatch. Next comes the nymph , that is newborn and immature. Now begin...
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Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd hair to develop anew. This process is called moulting and is repetitive in the...
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Line 7, column 136, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: larger
... moulting. Furthermore, the nymph grows larger in size. Finally, it balloons in the next nine ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...of its maturing process. Post completion , the nymph becomes a bee that is ready t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, furthermore, if, second, so, at least, in addition, on the whole, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 5.60731707317 232% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77403846154 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4787944184 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620192307692 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3268412734 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 66.2 112.824112599 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154702843743 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0569937439664 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.130268293352 0.0843802449381 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173502400405 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.19577389249 0.0819641961636 239% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.2329268293 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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