The bar graphs depicts the performance of boys and girls in different subjects in secondary school test.
On the whole, it is clear that girls have outperformed the boys in the period of research. Though this is only by a margin in most cases. The trend here is that in computer science and foreign languages most students have done well, whereas in social sciences like history and geography it was not the case.
While boys have delivered the best results in mathematics, with a pass percentage of 47.4%, the girls have aced computer science with 56 girls in every hundred clearing it. Even in quantitative field like maths, nearly 48 % passing was witnessed among boys. This is in contrast with 49.2% pass in girls. In case of foreign languages there is no break up of individual subjects. Hence, it is not possible to determine which language wise passing trend. Yet, what remains evident is that about 47% of students are able to get through. Chemistry is the subject which has a two is to one pass ratio for females and males respectively. The count of boys passing is a mere 14.1% with the girls being 30.2%.
In Physics there is an even divide, with around 36.7% and 34.2% being the passing rate for females and males respectively. The corresponding figures are 25.6% and 22.9% for History. Finally comes the case of geography where the boys overtake the girls. With only 20.1% girls clearing this subject, the boys have taken the lead by about 10%.
So to conclude, in most cases girls have possibly studied harder to clear these subjects with the exception of geography.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: You should probably use 'depict'.
Suggestion: depict
The bar graphs depicts the performance of boys and girls in di...
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Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...med the boys in the period of research. Though this is only by a margin in most cases....
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...igures are 25.6% and 22.9% for History. Finally comes the case of geography where the b...
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Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
... studied harder to clear these subjects with the exception of geography.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, hence, if, second, so, well, whereas, while, in contrast, in most cases, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 965.302439024 137% => OK
No of words: 274.0 196.424390244 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8102189781 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47137931174 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 106.607317073 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 283.868780488 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.7203672528 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5294117647 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1176470588 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 5.23603664747 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104070333071 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357881860813 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286555494446 0.0843802449381 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640932478962 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036473170873 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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