The following appeared in a memorandum written by the vice president of Nature's Way, a
chain of stores selling health food and other health-related products.
"Previous experience has shown that our stores are most profitable in areas where residents
are highly concerned with leading healthy lives. We should therefore build our next new store
in Plainsville, which has many such residents. Plainsville merchants report that sales of
running shoes and exercise clothing are at all-time highs. The local health club, which nearly
closed five years ago due to lack of business, has more members than ever, and the weight
training and aerobics classes are always full. We can even anticipate a new generation of
customers: Plainsville's schoolchildren are required to participate in a 'fitness for life' program,
which emphasizes the benefits of regular exercise at an early age."
The following argument assumes that since the people of plainsville are concerned about their physical fitness they will be attracted to the health food and other health related products sold by nature’s way, but that may not be the case as the residents of the town may like exercise in which case they may not agree with the use of health food and products for being physically fit.
The residents of plainsville show a tendency to buy products related to exercise for being physically fit but its not clear if they support the use of the health food and products. The merchants of the town have reported the sale of running shoes and exercise clothing being all-time high but there is no data to support the same for health food and other health related products. The local health club also has more members than ever and the weight training and aerobics are also full, which shows that the residents are interested in engaging themselves in more physical activities to keep themselves physically fit. but they do not show any tendency to use health food or any health related products. although nature’s way franchises tend to be more profitable in areas where residents lead a healthy life, it doesn’t necessarily mean that residents of pensville are like residents of other area where residents are attracted to the use of health related food or products.
The argument states that the schoolchildren in pensville are required to participate in fitness-for-life program, but it also states the fact that the program emphasizes the benefit of regular exercise at an early age. emphasizing about the benefit of exercise doesn’t mean that the children are encouraged to use health products. there is no evidence in this assumption that tells that the schools while encouraging students about the benefits of regular exercise will also encourage students to use health related food and other health related products.
although one nature’s way starts selling its products in pensville, residents may be attracted to the benefits of using such products and start using them thus boosting the sale of the store and making the successful in pensville, but the argument simply doesn’t provide enough data to assume this. The residents of the city are more focused to the benefits of exercise that the benefits of health food and health related products as stated in the argument.
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Essay evaluation report
minimum 3 arguments wanted.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.0 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 9 15
No. of Words: 399 350
No. of Characters: 1959 1500
No. of Different Words: 154 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.469 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.91 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.594 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 114 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 89 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 41 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 44.333 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 25.047 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.667 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.55 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.717 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.216 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...he use of the health food and products. The merchants of the town have reported the...
^^^
Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...food and other health related products. The local health club also has more members...
^^^
Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...ties to keep themselves physically fit. but they do not show any tendency to use he...
^^^
Line 3, column 705, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...th food or any health related products. although nature's way franchises tend to be...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Emphasizing
...it of regular exercise at an early age. emphasizing about the benefit of exercise doesn&apo...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 337, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
... are encouraged to use health products. there is no evidence in this assumption that ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...d and other health related products. although one nature's way starts selling it...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.9520958084 46% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 11.1786427146 170% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 13.6137724551 103% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 28.8173652695 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 55.5748502994 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 16.3942115768 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2025.0 2260.96107784 90% => OK
No of words: 396.0 441.139720559 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11363636364 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.56307096286 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75556198902 2.78398813304 99% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.401515151515 0.468620217663 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 625.5 705.55239521 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.96107784431 20% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.76447105788 68% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.22255489022 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 19.7664670659 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.8473053892 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 82.8309041221 57.8364921388 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 184.090909091 119.503703932 154% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.0 23.324526521 154% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.70786347227 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.25449101796 133% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.20758483034 122% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 6.88822355289 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280851454348 0.218282227539 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133993103916 0.0743258471296 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733263551631 0.0701772020484 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179434986264 0.128457276422 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624736868657 0.0628817314937 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 14.3799401198 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.94 48.3550499002 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.197005988 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.95 12.5979740519 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.32208582834 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 98.500998004 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 12.3882235529 218% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 11.1389221557 147% => OK
text_standard: 27.0 11.9071856287 227% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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