People have different concepts regarding shopping. Some people think that it is a free time activity and it can improve taste, style and living of standard. I beleive that, this is a debateable topic. I will share my negative and postive opinion regarding this topic.
At begin with, most of the people love to do shopping because they want to change their lifestyles. It is a habitual activity and people treat it as a hobby. Nowadays, people are most conscious about their standard of living. They want healthy life style. So, they purchase healthy commodities to their juveniles and family. Furthermore, house decoration, reformation of building and appartments items are really common in markets. So, that's why people enjoy to do shopping.
On the other hand, it is irrefutable that, shopping habit is reduce the people activity in the form of socail and environmental evoulation. Most of the people are busy in their own life. They have no concerned to their relatives, neighbours etc. They just purchase stuff just to show off the other people who does not purchase expensive items. It is a basic issue nowadays. That's why the ratio of unjutice or lack of distribution are mounting day by day.
I beleive that, eveything required balance position and we should try to focus our socail and environmental issues instead.
I put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that, shopping is not a bad habit. But we should not neglect other activities just because of shopping.
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Suggestion: enjoy doing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, really, regarding, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1234.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97580645161 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72388508347 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572580645161 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8899648712 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.7 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.1 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278820595113 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798321982951 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584478797074 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134071518133 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675015803896 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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