some people think that work is the most important thing of people's life. Without the success of career, life will become meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, more and more modern people would like to working in a big company which in a metropolitan as their lifestyle. they hold the opinion that life can be more meaningful if they got a huge success in career. From my point of view, they don’t know the real meaning of life. This essay will give a reasonable discussion.
Primarily, money seems to be the most important thing in people’s life. Without money, one can not pay the rent and all the fee around his life. So that everyone would like to make a huge success in their career. On account of they can make more money from that. And treasures can led them to a life with better quality. but every coin has two sides, people must pay more attention and time in the workplace than before, they will be more tired from the unbalance workstyle.
On the opposite view, the family also can support fully meaning to one’s life, in the love of kin's, money is not necessary for real. Your kids will grow up soon if you don’t spend time on play with them. it is sad that one’s parents may pass away before he becomes the millionaire. Therefore, in my opinion, the meaning of life is not success of career, it is the people who love you.
In conclusion, it is common that everyone has a different aim of live. No one can change that after all. but I hope people can take care of yourselves and cherish the precious hidden around you, don't be regret.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, after all, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55769230769 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41524681136 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573076923077 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.380133887 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.7058823529 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2941176471 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245324834233 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800918959617 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762103027586 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145107295743 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529314630319 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 12.4159519038 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.81 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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