Nowadays in a hectic work sehedule, holidays can be proved as a sweetest gift for every worker. It will be beneficially for them to stable their mind and concentrate on work affectively. However, some peole opion that break from a work is the best option to get fruitfull outcome for boss and lobour as well.Whereas, i firmly concur with the the statement and the advantages behind my prospective are discissed in impending paragraphs.
To embark with, as it can be observed that work burden has been escalated on worker's shoulder in recent years.It is happening due to competitive scenario.As a result, the small mistakes has taken the shape of mountain which effects the work efficiency as well as result of production.So to ameliorate this problem boss should interduce monthly vocations to hiredhands so that they can get relief from work and rejuvenate themsalves.To illustrate with, all the international work industeries give break their workers as a gift to boom their production level.
What is more, it has become a tedious task for parsonnel to spent some quality time with their family and themsalves.It happens due to intricate work process as a consequence, they get irritate and do not concentrate on work properly.So day off from work will work as boon for staff and they can devote themselves toward work.A good example in this point is, as per recent study, all the multi national companies has made the rule to give long voactions to workers to encourage work hard and increase production level.Neverthless, with this they can relax sometime and can monotony work schedule as well as it will impact on healthy body too
To recapitulate, witbout a doubt, staff is integral part of every workplace so if the workforce will be happy then the mushroom growth can be seen in outcome.Moreover, whatever is done by manager in the favour of hiredhand is always better whether giving them long holidays or incentives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, well, whereas, as a result, as well as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03726708075 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9999421313 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577639751553 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 325.320395918 49.4020404114 659% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 324.4 106.682146367 304% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.4 20.7667163134 310% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116287993031 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630578274517 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319574571567 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744569027913 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00933558170416 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.5 13.0946893788 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.52 50.2224549098 13% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.3 11.3001002004 250% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.84 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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