It's thought that to enjoy your time most, one should have challenging hobbies rather than easy ones. This essay will discuss why i completely agree with that idea.
Firstly, thinking of hobbies as a task you do in your leisure time with an end goal makes you quite enthusiastic, even how difficult it would be. Think how much fantastic to open your eyes in the morning with a great dream in your soul. In addition, this can certainly help you to overcome any work related stress or other life problems. Moreover, a recent study in Harvard university revealed that 80% of young amateur musicians who couldn't participate in professional concerts in their first year had let go playing. Hence, a passionate hobby brings much more amusement.
Secondly, it's reasonable enough that to keep your hobby, one should train more and more in order to improve his performance. Either playing a sport, reading, painting, or even cooking, more practice makes things become perfect. However, there may be no eagerness for training if you don't have a difficult challenge that pushes you. for instance, many athletes state that the most happiness they get is while they are training hard just before matches in championships. While the time they were away from competence turned them relatively lazy and out of performance.
In conclusion, having difficult hobbies to do in your spare time would be more enjoyable because it makes adrenaline rush in your body. In my opinion, this is a completely justified claim.
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?! 61
- Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- Films and games can be accessed at any time from mobile devices like smartphones, tablets and laptop computers.Do the advantages of such development outweigh the disadvantages? 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.028 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65691851588 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0053202953 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7857142857 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159144503484 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518844422469 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746383170991 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0983572582297 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380800636184 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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