Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, children often join many sorts of competitions, yet individual category is more often than team-work. Many people argue that children should be motivated to join competition. On the contrary, some people trust that children should be encouraged to co-operate instead of competing with others. However, in my opinion, children would be useful adults if they are given mixed skills both sense of competing and co-operating.
There are many people who have faith that competition is the best way to make children to be better adults than others because of many reasons. Firstly, competition ...
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