Over the past two years, the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically. Many Central Plaza store owners believe that the decrease in their business is due to the number of skateboard users in the plaza. There has also been a dramatic increase in the amount of litter and vandalism throughout the plaza. Thus, we recommend that the city prohibit skateboarding in Central Plaza. If skateboarding is prohibited here, we predict that business in Central Plaza will return to its previously high levels.
The argument states the decreasing of the number of shoppers in Central Plaza due to the increasing of the practice of skateboarding around such place.
Firstly, it is stated about the decreasing in business however, after two years many other things might have happened. For instance, other shoppers near Central Plaza have been opened. Then, people looked forward to going to such new places. One because the prices of the goods are cheaper. Also, because there are more goods than in Central Plaza. Therefore, it is not clear to say that the decreasing is due to the skateboard users.
Secondly, there is no evidence about the litter and vandalism around the plaza. If a survey was taken asking costumers around the plaza, it would be worth to state about the drawbacks. In addition, vandalism and litter may not be made by skateboard users. There are many other people who can do such unpeasant acts.
Finally, it is not clearly state that prohibiting skatedoarding is the solution for business in the plaza. If the argument wants to say that skateboarding is the issue for the business in Central Plaza, then it has to come up with stronger evidence to be worth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, as to, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.6327345309 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.9520958084 31% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 11.1786427146 18% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 28.8173652695 28% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 55.5748502994 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 2260.96107784 43% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 200.0 441.139720559 45% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.855 5.12650576532 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.56307096286 82% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57766852019 2.78398813304 93% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 204.123752495 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53 0.468620217663 113% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 705.55239521 43% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.76447105788 11% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 19.7664670659 66% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 22.8473053892 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.159216487 57.8364921388 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6923076923 119.503703932 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 23.324526521 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.69230769231 5.70786347227 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.67664670659 150% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314925949744 0.218282227539 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109360704559 0.0743258471296 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944974422423 0.0701772020484 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.215822393455 0.128457276422 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102631010908 0.0628817314937 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 14.3799401198 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.3550499002 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.197005988 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.5979740519 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.32208582834 93% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 98.500998004 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 12.3882235529 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.1389221557 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.9071856287 67% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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