Nowadays, it is commonly accepted that making some unspecific courses as a requirement for students in universities should be avoided. Most of the students are highly disappointed and believe that it is not fair. Therefore, I to a great extent, disagree with this idea that all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.
First and foremost, education time at university is limited. The main purpose of enrolling to university is mastering some specific and advanced knowledge and skills in one specific field. Managers should plan schedules in the way which students can learn as much as possible in this limited period. Making busy and full filling students time with courses that have not any benefits for their future job is incredible. For example, a biology student can take some more laboratory training instead to spend money and time for passing history courses that have not any practical benefit for her.
Another significant fact that should be taken into consideration is that forcing students to take these kinds of courses could discourage them from continuing study at universities. A lot of students do not spend much time for study and prepare for these courses, because they find them boring and useless. Whereby, it negatively affects their average grade which increases their displeasure and hopeless from the study.
Finally, yet importantly, some people believe that the history of our country is an important matter and all of the citizens should obtain sufficient information about it. History of a country explain their cultural values and illustrate the personality of a nation, Nonetheless, young people already have enough knowledge about these historical concepts from their previous education in school. For example, I remember, the history courses were present on our schedules during all years of study in school. Thus, imposing additional ones have not any practical reason.
On the basis of the reasons that were mentioned above, I am convinced that history should not be a required course at university. Because it discourages students, and waste valuable education time, and have not an essential practice.
- A person should never make an important decision alone. 70
- In order to become financially responsible adults, children should learn to manage their own money at a young age. 73
- TPO 26 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Leadership comes naturally: one cannot learn to be a leader.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they already know how to do well. 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 106, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
... our country is an important matter and all of the citizens should obtain sufficient infor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, nonetheless, so, therefore, thus, for example, of course, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.0286738351 109% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 43.0788530466 81% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 52.1666666667 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 1977.66487455 94% => OK
No of words: 351.0 407.700716846 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31339031339 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73670118284 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532763532764 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 593.1 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4597509393 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.705882353 100.406767564 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6470588235 20.6045352989 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58823529412 5.45110844103 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.85842293907 285% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339421162713 0.236089414692 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107917137528 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115149669304 0.0737576698707 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199046855994 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122019637902 0.0645574589148 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 11.7677419355 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 58.1214874552 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.1575268817 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 10.9000537634 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.01818996416 109% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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