The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph illustrates the percentage of unemployment in women who lived in the four areas of the UK between 2013 and 2014.
Overall, there was a fluctuate trend in women unemployment rate in England, Wales and Northern Ireland. Those three countries increased the non-workers rate in the first year and drop similarly in the second year while Scotland shown the significant different in rising the unemployment rate in year later.
According to the graph, England was the highest rate at 6.8% in 2013 and then reduced minimally to 6.5% in 2014. Similarity to Wales which started at 5.4% in 2013 and then slight dropped to 5.0% in the year later. Scotland started at 6.1% in unemployment rate and then increased remarkably to reach the highest rate of unemployment in 2014.
However, Northern Ireland started at the rate 5.6% in 2013. After this point, the trend significant reduced 1.0%, being exactly 4.6%, in 2014.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 20, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...n 2013 and 2014. Overall, there was a fluctuate trend in women unemployment rate in Eng...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, similarly, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0522875817 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70305494666 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 77.0 106.607317073 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503267973856 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 214.2 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.23885192 43.030603864 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.625 112.824112599 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189556599717 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940397564437 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443986321586 0.0843802449381 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121507684966 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026911931892 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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