Some people think that mothers should spent most of their time to raise family, therefore government should support them financially. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
It is sometimes argued that mothers usually take the responsibility of bringing their offspring up. I completely agree with the assertion that they are supposed to be given financial support by the state.
I would argue for the view that mothers are the best people to take care of children. Having maternal instinct enables women to love children and know how to react while babies start crying. This sense also pushes them to become more patient, and manage to devote their time and effort to children in comparison with their male counterparts. This is the main reason why in many societies, women are traditionally recognized as a person who should stay at home and raise their offspring. As traditional family roles of husbands and wives, breadwinners and housewives respectively, have been no longer applicable in some part of the world, this view is quite understandable that why female partner of marriage ought to dedicate most of their time to child rearing.
Furthermore, government should subsidize mothers who bear the responsibility of rearing child. Those women who give up their jobs to raise family usually become reliant on their husbands to survive, and lose some of their valuable skills which play an important role in landing a job. If government allocated some funds from its budget to support mothers, they would not be willing to work either to gain their financial independence or to make a contribution to make a better living. The state benefits given to mothers can encourage them to spend even far more time with their children without feeling the financial burden imposed on family.
In conclusion, I fully support the view that females should focus on children's upbringing and meeting basic family needs, and the valuable role they play in society need to be appreciated by providing extra financial resources.
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- Some people think that mothers should spent most of their time to raise family, therefore government should support them financially. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement? 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...by providing extra financial resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11221122112 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76493999975 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594059405941 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.5214935674 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249408886469 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876627984131 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377730514217 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139743811662 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576422676311 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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