Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Countries should not isolate themselves from the world but instead engage other countries.

The topic at hand is shoul'd countries isolate themselves or engage with each other instead? This topic is specially important nowadays because it touches the proper approach to regulate contemporary policy. In my view, countries should interact with other world, i believe that because it would bring peace in our world.

Chosing not to conduct the isolation policy is preferable because as a result, countries will help each other. To support my opinion we can see an example: sometimes country can suffer from unforeseen internal problems such as poverty, crisis, war and so on. Thus by bolstering a coutry like this, it can positively affect the welfare of people living in it. I believe that by engaging with other contries we can help counries in need.

Additionally, by interacting with other world countries we won't allow devastating wars to happen. According to one saying it is posible to tear one thread, but imposible to tear the bunch ot theads conected together. The same with countries: by reaching entity we wont led these things to happen. I believe that by cooperating with each other our world can be more peaceful than it is today.

Last reason not to isolate counries from each other is that it will lead to world unity in the future. It is my belief that by using this approach we will eliminate our probmems that related to variety of counries. Finally, I think it is better option because humanity can someday be more united again.

As my essay has demonstrated, the choice for not isolating countries from each other is better option. I believe this because we can make our world better place to live.

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Average: 7 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, so, thus, i think, such as, as a result, in my view

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 52.1666666667 73% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 278.0 407.700716846 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89928057554 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57295598081 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557553956835 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 18.6978441271 48.9658058833 38% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.125 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.375 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0625 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273948852404 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102899978225 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103735725848 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164037428219 0.150856017488 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772766506149 0.0645574589148 120% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 11.7677419355 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200

Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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