You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write abaut the following topic:
Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and
character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words
Culture is generally known as a way of life. The way a person dresses might decipher their way of life and upbringing. This essay will discuss the effectiveness to predict an individual culture and character by their outlook with respect to the way they're dressed.
Civilization has brought different changes which are positive as well as negative, this includes greetings, norms, culture and clothing. In the early fifteen centuries, some certain tribes wear distinct outfit that tells a story, it could be a cloth to notify respect which is for a king or a cloth to identify them to a certain ethnic group or religion status. In the olden days, people can easily tell who an individual is by simply looking at their clothing. Taking Indians for an example, their outfits are long sari's with a scarf tied around their waist, they also have marks to differentiate married women from single ladies.
Recently, most individuals have eradicated certain practices out of their daily lifestyles either to conform or seek validation. Coperate organizations have dress codes and it would inappropriate to wear traditionals or local wears against the policy of the organization. This has made it difficult to guess the character or the background this individual is from. However, some companys make some certain days flexible allowing staffs to dress as they wish, although, most individuals feel out place wearing odd clothing so they would rather stick to norms.
Finally, migration and relocation as been detrimental in respect to an individual's clothing. There's a saying which states that "when in Rome you behave like the Romans", this translates to wherever you find yourself you abide with the conforment of the place. Indians, leaving in Iran would have no choice than covering up every part of their body and using head gears which aint part of their traditional dressing.
In conclusion, in the early days it is easy to tell people apart by the way they dress and how they relate to people, some tribes in the yoruba kingdom of Nigeria finds it mandatory to kneel when greeting an elderly person. This would look absurd doing this in an official gathering. In recent days it's almost impossible to tell a person culture or character by their choice of dressing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, however, if, look, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, by the way, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06366047745 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72030884438 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570291777188 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1763047945 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.294117647 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1764705882 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15694547417 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0535498555885 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386579717887 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0904052613076 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03403911882 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.