Some people believe that society try ot save every plant adn naimal species, despite the expense to humans in effort, time, and financial well-being. Others believe that society need not make extraordinary efforts, especially at a great cost in money and jobs , to save endangered species.
Is saving endangered plants and animals species is the first thing society should try on any cost? Here, in the above statement there is a clash of ideas of two opposite thinking groups in a society. One group claims that each and every endangered plant or animal has to be saved from extinction, even if it required humongous amount of effort, time or it relates to financial well being. On the contrary, other faction of people posits that it is not pragmatic to use surfeit amount of money and time for saving those species who are on the verge of extinct. This statement in itself is ambiguous and need a wide approach to understand by anyone.
First of all, relinquish everything we have and saving each and every extinction species is not a very pragmatic approach. By doing this, one can put our jobs and social life in jeopardize and the result of this might not end up well for anyone. However, being ignorant to such a crises is also not a option for the human society. So, approaching such crisis with a balanced posture is the best way to tackle such tasks. A organization can be made of various age groups who can help at a certain period of time and they can help saving endangering spices. For instance, suppose few workers have certain days off on their daily routine, so all members of the society who are available at that time can help saving those species.
Secondly, it is not always the case where using plethora of money and time can save any endangered species. There are another reasons too which plays an important role for the species to be saved. For example, polar Bears need an glacial temperature for their existence and they are not able to survive because of constantly increasing temperature due to global warming. By spending any amount of money, time or efforts one cannot save such species because this things will not help to mollify the temperature in the arctic zone. Hence, instead of doing something for the effect, one have to control the cause of such malicious events happening directly or indirectly by human society. One can save such species by reducing the global warming and ultimately it will reduce the temperature .
However, human society can save various birds like the sparrow. Another path to save such species is to simply increase the awareness of such species being endangered. An instructive drive may be helpful for such species , instructing about the habits of such species and to spread knowledge about things that can harm the species. This kind of drives will not require much money and can hopefully save various species. And also, various events of the human society also have to be banned like cutting forest for industrial use, constructing various buildings for business use and reducing the amount of unused land. those factors can also affect the species indirectly.
Hence, one can always save various species by restricting the malicious events done by the human mankind rather than spending excess money, and time to placate the effect. According to me, the latter group of human society is however vaguely true about the concern of saving endangered species.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, for instance, kind of, first of all, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 19.5258426966 118% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 12.4196629213 169% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.3162921348 80% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 33.0505617978 76% => OK
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2606.0 2235.4752809 117% => OK
No of words: 537.0 442.535393258 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85288640596 5.05705443957 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.55969084622 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47063428851 2.79657885939 88% => OK
Unique words: 254.0 215.323595506 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.472998137803 0.4932671777 96% => OK
syllable_count: 833.4 704.065955056 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0649472731 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.24 118.986275619 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.48 23.4991977007 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52 5.21951772744 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 7.80617977528 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177529504906 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594461328606 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052660953993 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12360978042 0.150359130593 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052675385736 0.0667264976115 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 48.8420337079 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.1743820225 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 100.480337079 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.