People are doing more online shopping due to digitalization era. Market trend has been shifted from offline to online because of multiple factors in the market. In this essay, we will discuss pros and cons of digital shopping for both consumers and companies.
It is considered by some that buying online product make consumers life more comfortable and convenient, where people order to product anytime and anywhere in the world. To illustrate, consumer can buy branded items in the discounted price, which is very low price compared to offline buying. We will pay online from different ways as debit card, credit card, and paytm which companies will provide many benefits such as point redeem, discount on fix bill amount and gift vouchers. Company will sale an items as stock clearance and they will give discount on product which they will take more profits how
On the other hand, sometimes, people did not receive same product as mention in the picture. That's why consumer disappointed from the product and they will return the order to the company and give rating low. Due to these reason, it effects on companies reputation. Company manufacture a product in the bulk and sometimes, it will not prepare well. However, companies will destroy the product and start new production. In that situation, It wasted materials, man hours and other things, which will effect on companies profit. Again, they will start reproduction of the items and start process of selling. They will spend money on marketing, production and other require things.
In conclusion, online trend is better than offline trend. Company will give to us door to door facility. Buying online items will help to us, which people will save them time and consumers will feel burden free life.
- An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies. 11
- An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies. 11
- An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies. 11
- An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies. 11
- An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an item' or simply 'items'?
Suggestion: an item; items
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Suggestion:
...ct which they will take more profits how On the other hand, sometimes, people did...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...same product as mention in the picture. Thats why consumer disappointed from the prod...
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Line 5, column 245, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'companies'' or 'company's'?
Suggestion: companies'; company's
...low. Due to these reason, it effects on companies reputation. Company manufacture a produ...
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Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
... man hours and other things, which will effect on companies profit. Again, they will s...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...d consumers will feel burden free life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06849315068 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46327881914 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558219178082 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4121296147 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0588235294 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1764705882 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76470588235 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0778497856519 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286026042549 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0324726071733 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552869163569 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198171588289 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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