An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies.

People are doing more online shopping due to digitalization era. Market trend has been shifted from offline to online because of multiple factors in the market. In this essay, we will discuss pros and cons of digital shopping for both consumers and companies.

It is considered by some people that buying online product make consumer's life more comfortable and convenient, where people can order products anytime and anywhere in the world. To illustrate, consumer can buy branded items with discounted prices, which is very low price compared to offline market. We can pay online by different ways such as debit card, credit card, and paytm. Companies will provide many benefits such as point redeem, discount on fix bill amount and gift vouchers. Company will sell items as stock clearance and they will give discount on product on which they will take more profits.

On the other hand, sometimes, people do not receive same product as mentioned in the picture. That's why consumer gets disappointed from the product and they will return the order to the company and will give low rating. Due to this reason, it effects on companies reputation. Company manufacture a product in bulk and sometimes, it is not prepared well. However, companies will destroy the product and start new production. In that situation, It wasted materials, man hours and other things, which will affect on companies profit. Again, they will start reproduction of the items and start process of selling. They will spend money on marketing, production and other required things.

In conclusion, online trend is better than offline trend. Company will give us door to door facility. Buying online items will help us. People will save their time and consumers will feel burden free life.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, well, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12110726644 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49370803391 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557093425606 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6733454057 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.45 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0783691266584 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273761814591 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030155917441 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0554744357341 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019743636628 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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