Over the past years, the phenomenon of hosting major sports events and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by some that hosting sports events creates lots of problems, such issue is regarded thoroughly both positive and constructive by a number of individuals. In my opinion, the benefits of hosting major sports event far outweigh its drawbacks, and I will elaborate in the following essay.
To begin with, bidding to host sports events is a blessing which can increase a nation’s reputation and help it gain international acceptance. The raise in profile further provides economic benefits on attracting tourists and large investment. For instance, a research conducted by Chinese Ministry of Economic Affairs showed a 56% increase in the business investment to China after Beijing hosted the Summer Olympics in 2008. Therefore, hosting major sports event increases a country’s recognition in the world and promotes economic growth.
Furthermore, significant long-term investment must be considered before hosting sports events. Governments shall invest in building sports infrastructure, public transportation and athletic accommodation which ultimately create numberless job opportunities around the cities. According to one of my study which I conducted in university, South Africa successfully reduced its unemployment rate to 12% in the year ahead of World Cup in 2014. Hence, it is impossible to deny the short-term economic benefits for hosting major sports events.
In conclusion, although the potential negative effects that a major sport events brings must be taken into account, I believe that bidding to host a sport event boosts a country’s economic growth and improve a country’s international position while its drawbacks can be eliminated through government’s careful plan and organisation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
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Message: Did you mean 'gains'?
Suggestion: gains
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'event'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1207.87684729 133% => OK
No of words: 276.0 242.827586207 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.81884057971 5.00649968141 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31010336531 2.71678728327 122% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 139.433497537 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601449275362 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 379.143842365 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.5258642743 50.4703680194 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.833333333 104.977214359 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.9669160288 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.25397266985 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216418327339 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884961093863 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0587760588158 0.071462118173 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139118729532 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0352494854361 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 12.6369458128 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 11.5310837438 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.32886699507 119% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 55.0591133005 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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