Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am Anna, I am working as a "Senior Secretary" at "Welfare Society", Boston, I am writing this letter in connection of a recent article published in 2nd March edition about the cover story of Mr. Harly's life.
I am afraid, but a lot of details are not correct in it, and I can confirm this because I am a good family friend. Apart from a successful businessman, Mr. Harly always stays in limelight due to his magnanimous personality and philanthropical charity work, and there is no issue about this in his family. the facts that need to be correct are, it was his father who served in the army for eleven years not him. Also, despite his young age, he is not a bachelor, he is a happily married person. In fact, he is blessed with two bright twins who are pursuing their study in London on scholarship.
I need you to clarify these facts and publish a new story with proofs, moreover, do not try to disguise your readers it can harm the prestige of your newspaper.
Looking for prompt action from your side.
Your Sincerely,
Anna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 28, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r/ Madam, I am Anna, I am working as a 'Senior Secretary' at 'W...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut the cover story of Mr. Harlys life. I am afraid, but a lot of details are no...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...e is no issue about this in his family. the facts that need to be correct are, it w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, in fact, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 895.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66145833333 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84639586162 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661458333333 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6145575676 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4444444444 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0828655068975 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234333249128 0.0766984524023 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275025277675 0.0603063233224 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0429573723337 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02998413809 0.0580467560999 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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