Topic:When designing a building ,the most important thing to take into account is the intended use of the building rather than its appearance .
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about a design of buildings.While some people just considers use purposes of these buildings rather than its appearance,I would argue that both use form and appearance might be equally taken into consideration.
On the one hand, It is understandable why some thinks that the use intention of buildings is rather important than its gorgeous appearance.A justification for this could be that constructing a building is to protect themselves from extreme weather such as heat wave and downpour.In fact,a concrete building would help people be alive if heavy rain and thunderstorm happened unexpectedly.Another plausible explaination might be that humans just want to find it satisfied every time when they come back home.For example,it is important for people to feel relax when their houses are multi-funtional and temperate temperature regulations insides as preventing houses from getting radiation of sunlight.
On the other hand,I would believe that both the house’ way of using and beauty.The first reason is that people usually feel more attractive with a convenient and luxurious house.Therefore, the possession of a beautiful and useful house is extremely necessary.Additionally, values of houses usually intend to suggest to wealth of owners ,consequently, focusing on a living safe place’s form and quality might be done show lives of the rich off.
In conclusion, while some supports to invest inside values of houses rather than the style of eye-catching construction ,I would stay firm that the concentration on both sides should be performed to make a perfect view of a house.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50199203187 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.46900096783 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.633466135458 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 192.479869077 49.4020404114 390% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 345.25 106.682146367 324% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.75 20.7667163134 302% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.5 7.06120827912 389% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17946907006 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108154670387 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712914207795 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108154670387 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712914207795 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.9 13.0946893788 274% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 50.2224549098 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.51 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.05 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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