Topic: Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology .
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
The appearance of technology has contributed to several changes in society ,and has also transformed the way of interaction among people with each other these days .In this essay,I would argue that which ways of communication advanced technology has made to people and it might bring many benefits to users on a daily basis.
To begin with, technology has helped people be able to keep in touch with each other more easily while they are standing in far-flung places .For example , a person living in Africa can contact with his lover living in Vietnam if he uses a mobile phone or video call.Unlike in the past ,users must write by hand letters taken a lot of time to give to receivers and sometimes lacked of guaranteeing confidential information to users.Moreover, using video calls have connected frequently from one person to another regardless of extreme weather conditions to people living in two sides of globe .
It is undeniable that the introduction of technological revolution has enhanced the communication among people in the world.In fact, humans have reaped many benefits from the progression as quality of communication has been improved because of using high-tec means of communication such as calling cards .This usage ,as a result, has made motivation to investors or stock market managers enable to inform accurate and quick data from their market.
In conclusion,technological age has bloomed , making the reduction of waiting for information of people living in the far distance and making more convenient during the process was used.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21513944223 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12295068895 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653386454183 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 421.2 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 62.0 20.2975951904 305% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 151.108197991 49.4020404114 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 327.25 106.682146367 307% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 62.75 20.7667163134 302% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.0 7.06120827912 382% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.01903807615 458% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288138994169 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175276901614 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10583870497 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175276901614 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10583870497 0.056905535591 186% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.5 13.0946893788 263% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.09 50.2224549098 0% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 28.7 11.3001002004 254% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.18 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.8 10.1190380762 265% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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