The flow chart illustrates the lifespan of salmon fish. Overall, the process will be divided into three following stages.
In the first stage, adult salmons have to swim to the upper river. Then, they lay a number of eggs in the water areas with many reeds and small stones, where the river`s flow is not fast. Once eggs hatch out, over the next 5-6 months baby salmons can grow to 3-8 cm length and become the fry.
In the following stage, the fry goes down along the river and live in the lower river, where the flow of the river is really fast. After this, during a four-year period fry grows 12-15 cm long so-called smolt.
Finally, the smolt swims to open sea, where they live approximately 5 years and become the adult salmon with 70 to 76 cm length. Then, adult salmons go back to the upper river, where they hatched out and the life cycle is repeated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, really, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 715.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49685534591 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.05087386743 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.616352201258 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8359391107 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4444444444 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108793471237 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.050345414837 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408670269513 0.0843802449381 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0684535777635 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314103201411 0.0819641961636 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.96 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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