Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Large supermarkets have recently introduced online grocery shopping. While many shoppers do their shopping online, many still tend to prefer shopping the traditional way by visiting the supermarket. This essay will discuss why online food shopping has its benefits but why traditional food shopping ultimately superior.
Online food shopping is certainly an efficient way to complete what many people consider to be in a laborious chore. A person can simply click trough a website and have food delivered within a very short period of the to one’s door. As an example, a major supermarket in Australia promises a three hour turnaround time on grocery delivery. Being able to shop online saves busy people the unnecessary hassle of having to visit a supermarket.
But not everyone needs to save time and visiting a supermarket can in fact be an extremely positive experience. Walking through the aisles allows one to choose from a vast array of different products and to decide exactly what goes into the shopping basket. For example, think about the variety different vegetables available at a supermarket. It is enjoyable selecting the best avocado from the pile. It goes without saying that supermarket shopping; if you have the time can be, a pleasurable experience.
With the introduction of online food shopping, traditional routines are being challenged. This essay discussed why online shopping can be an extremely efficient process but why shopping at the supermarket in person can be such a pleasurable experience. In my opinion visiting the supermarket offers a superior experience to online shopping.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...superior experience to online shopping.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, still, while, for example, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3359375 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98186863013 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56640625 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.6753319255 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.0666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0666666667 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212755438953 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711533613353 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780491754214 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143517939127 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0882170190862 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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