Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the conventional method of shopping groceries from supermarkets is getting replaced by internet retailing. While many people prefer to visit these stores for buying food, others choose the online mode for this purpose. I support purchasing of foodstuffs online. This essay will discuss both points of view.
A group of people believe that shopping foods directly from grocery stores helps in maintaining the quality of foodstuffs. This is because one themselves chooses the product they want and hence, can ensure that the product is not an expired one and has the quality that they are looking in for. For example, when buying some apples from a shop one can ensure that none of them is damaged and the item is worth money.
However, others argue that when buying staples online there are greater chances for getting a damaged or misplaced product. Due to lack of physical presence one cannot guarantee on quality. Despite this argument, I strongly believe than there are ways to ensure the quality of products as customers can review the item that they bought online and negative feedbacks can have an adverse ramifications on businesses. For instance, the online shopping sites like Amazon, Flipkart etc are being widely used for buying groceries and has got a review and feedback section after each purchase which enables us to get a clear idea about the quality of products and any bad comments can have negative consequences on their businesses.
In conclusion, the innovations in the neural network system is pushing people towards cybershopping and I strongly encourage this development despite the opinion given by some people who support the idea of visiting supermarkets to ensure quality of products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 386, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'ramification'?
Suggestion: ramification
... negative feedbacks can have an adverse ramifications on businesses. For instance, the online...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17142857143 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63105472759 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567857142857 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.5443287196 49.4020404114 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.666666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237867302084 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867878034963 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718336588428 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155955232719 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855091998358 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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