It is true that cities are seem as places of opportunities and these cities attracts ton of migrators year after year, but there are also some major drawbacks of living in a large metropolis. In my opinion, there are plenty of things that government could do to improve city life of the average inhabitant.
First of all, the main problem that everyone have to face with day in day out is the cost. Unlikely to a small town or a village, living a big city means that the cost of living is much higher than it is in rural areas. Not only for housing and service but they also have to pay higher for food or transport. Secondly, another issue is that urban area tend to suffer from society problem such as the high proportion of crime compare to countryside. Furthermore, the air quality in cities is often poor due to the pollution of factory and traffic, and the street and public transport are always overcrowded in rush hour. As a result, living in large cities can be detrimental and unhealthy.
However, there are various steps that government could do in order to tackle these described above. Firstly, they can invest money in social housing to minimize the cost of living. Secondly, decreasing the number of private vehicles by make high tax on them, and upgrade the traffic system as well as the public transport are also a vital key factor in reducing air pollution. A third option would be develop inhabitant’s life in rural area by moving industry and jobs to those regions in order to decrease the number of migrator.
In conclusion. Living in cities would lead to ton of issues and drawbacks, but there are various ways that government could do to tackle these problems.
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- Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is to a job straight after school. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 67
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'seemed'.
Suggestion: seemed
It is true that cities are seem as places of opportunities and these ci...
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Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'mean'?
Suggestion: mean
...ll town or a village, living a big city means that the cost of living is much higher ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, well, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68456375839 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.591342872 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543624161074 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6660842384 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.384615385 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5384615385 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223157143812 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683898949381 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571807967425 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127194746845 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0463811876815 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.16 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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