Most people accept that we now live in a globalisation world but not everyone agree that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development?
In able- bodied, there are number of people may assertion that evolution on international level never been supportive but instead, vocalize that as we know all homeosapin habitat in a globe environment. So I will discuss optimistic development in my upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in the advancement technology help us to human beings .It becomes make a globalisation world Because, a lot of nation has play pivotal role in gestation of nation like as international companies could an import and an export with the assist of all countries. Therefore,
a new machinery an enhance to individual skill but it is elegant for boost up economy as well as bond good relationship midst countries with Co- operation. A most overseas has developed in medical research , education system as such as technology so that united state of America, Canada, especially China is a good illustration to show that a globe perevalance in the advancement.
Interestingly, since an individual fulfilled own requirement through development if any nation have a sources so he has easily migrated cuisine in anywhere. While, at acient time a community relie on pigeon to transported letter as a post man but in computer techno everyone bring a message through electronic mail and pupils have a depth knowledge about any learningprogram can learnt in at home by online amenities it is successful these a day so the world have it face of globalisation. The best epitome of this is China has make any thing and who has a business from peak and widened over the world by use of technology.
To recapitulate, in modernisation an individual believe that can changing of international level so we know that everything has obvious postivity while the drawbacks but it depend upon people how to have used features of technology and accessed a benefit of advancement like computer and it has lot of disadvantages but ignore that and use it as you enjoyed own life style.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04643962848 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17581644462 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603715170279 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.2975951904 172% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.6546754832 49.4020404114 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 181.111111111 106.682146367 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.8888888889 20.7667163134 173% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.44444444444 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106926508965 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402134215621 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0177025203172 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519553355205 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0133099478749 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.0946893788 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.49 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.1190380762 158% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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