The pie charts show information on the proportion of carbohidrates, protein, and fatin three different diets
The pie charts show information on the proportion of carbohidrates, protein, and fatin three different diets on the whole , diet proportion for 3 different different diets almost the some, overall of all different type of diets compored to others.
According to the percentage , healty diet for dport need of 50% carbohydrates like a healthy diet, and for average demiet need at least 40% carbohydrat, smaller than the others , but for protein needs more than other up 40%, wheres for healty diet for sport and healty diet just need 25% and 30% . For fat portion , heathy diet and average diet have the same tendency is 20% , comparated with healthy diet just need 25% and 30% for fat portion , healthy diet and average diet have the same tendency is 20% , compared with healthy diet for sport whi needs less 15% for fat
- Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults.Discuss both these views and and give your own opinion. 73
- some people think that government should spend money to protect the wild animals which are endangered but others think that extinction of wild animals is a natural phenomena and thus government should not waste money. Discuss both views and give your opin 67
- The chart below show the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational sitting in UK in 2010. 67
- the chart below shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010 67
- some people think that government should spend money to protect the wild animals which are endangered but others think that extinction of wild animals is a natural phenomena and thus government should not waste money. Discuss both views and give your opin 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, at least, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 33.7804878049 38% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 674.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 140.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81428571429 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43979062825 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5292301424 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 189.9 283.868780488 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 46.0 22.4926829268 205% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 20.4178571082 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 224.666666667 112.824112599 199% => OK
Words per sentence: 46.6666666667 22.9334400587 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 11.6666666667 5.23603664747 223% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320874632075 0.215688989381 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.290020913093 0.103423049105 280% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.28321538718 0.0843802449381 336% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.397357521257 0.15604864568 255% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.293135473895 0.0819641961636 358% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.6 13.2329268293 186% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.71 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 10.3012195122 183% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.51 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 40.7170731707 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 11.4329268293 157% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.4 10.9970731707 186% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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