It is thought by many people that plastic shopping bags should be prohibited, as they are major source of waste ,which just not pollutes the land but also the sea ,around the world.
In my opinion, i totally agree with this fact as this forms a major threat to the mankind as well marine life .
Firstly , Non recyclable plastic, forms a major source of pollution. Plastic material is formed with certain hazardous materials which cannot be recycled easily and as a result, it causes a lot of land fillings all over the world and eventually forming as a major source of pollutant . Further more, it is reported that it takes several years for such waste to get decomposed which puts the entire mankind at serious risk. To exemplify , in a recent survey , reported by famous magazine’ Times’ that more than 30% of the total waste which is found on the waste barren lands is non recyclable . Hence government should keep a cap on using the plastic and take necessary steps to ban them.
On the other hand , Garbage affects the marine animals too to a larger extent . People are often seen throwing garbage into water bodies such as rivers and most importantly sea ,which is causing a high level of contamination to water as well to the aquatic animals reside in them .It is also reported according to the recent survey , that a large whale was found dead ,due to the consumption of around 1.8 kgs of plastic.
To conclude, people should be responsible and religiously avoid such garbage dumps ,which takes a great toll on several lives. Also , government should take necessary measures in banning non- recyclable products and promote to using bags instead .
- In countries where unemployment is high, education should only be obligatory up to primary school and not secondary school. To what extend do you agree or disagree. 84
- Some people think that watching sport is wastage of time during leisure time. Do you agree or disagree? 73
- As countries develop, people tend to buy more and more cars. Do you thing the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment? 95
- Some people think that the modern technology is making people more sociable, while others think it is making them less sociable. Discuss both the views and give your opinion. 78
- Nowadays, there is a trend that reports of media focus on problems and emergencies rather than positive development. Some people think it is harmful to individuals and to society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, so, well, such as, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85614035088 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56805649683 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575438596491 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.6264526694 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9090909091 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205144183478 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0792501421548 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0805927830803 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12465693859 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974382334571 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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