Scientists have been warning from many years about environmental protection and we should limit the use of energy in daily lives. What are the reasons for that? How to encourage people to take an interest towards environment protection?
Scientists, all around the globe have been stressing to limit the consumption of energy in our day to day lives. This is because people are consuming more than mother earth can reproduce. This increased use of energy is also contributing towards global warming. Therefore, people should be educated to preserve the environment, which could be done by motivating people to use recyclable products as well as by imposing taxes on excessive fuel consumption.
These days, people are using energy more than ever before due to the increase in their purchasing power. The use of energy is even more than reproduction capacity of our planet., which can lead to the scarcity of both renewable and non-renewable resources for our future generations. In addition, this excessive use of energy is also contributing towards global warming and various environmental hazards because of the emission of greenhouse gases such as, carbon dioxide. Cyclones, hurricanes, tsunamis, floods and debris are on their rise with their devastating effects. For example, a recent flood in Mozambique took lives of more than 1000 people.
There is a dire need to motivate people to protect our environment and make earth a livable place This can be done by educating people to use recyclable products and by banning the use of plastic. For example, in New Zealand many super markets have already abandoned plastic bags. Moreover, governments should consider imposing taxes on fuel consumption for private cars. This is because, such an action will encourage people to use public transport, which will eventually contribute to the reduction of fuel consumption.
To recapitulate, I believe experts are concerned on limiting the use of energy because of the excessive emission of greenhouse gases and the limited production capacity of our planet. Educating people to use recyclable products and imposing taxes on fuel consumption are some steps that could be taken to preserve the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3108974359 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91526276441 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516025641026 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3874504102 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.466666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229166958236 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768446199874 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0366316601724 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147695850636 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395064317498 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.