Nowadays, staying in foreign countries are really common. It has several reason, people want to live other countries just because of better education, employment purposes and improve standard of living. This is most debatable issue right now. I will share some advantages and disadvantages related to this topic.
At begin with, Firstly, I would like to discuss about advantages. Why people are going to other countries? There are many reasons. I put in to two segments. Mostly people are going other countries to learn new thing which is related to culture, languages and traditions. Today, people are more creative mind. They love to know about different countries, meet native people and so on. That's why they prefer to go outside through immigration and visit visa. For example, The tourism sector is increasing day by day. Even, In, UK, country is the best example of it. Many people are visit there because their people have huge amount of hospitality and friendly attitude. They love art and promote all over the world in positive manners.
Secondly, people are more conscious attitude related to their standard of living, Education system and further facilities. That's why majority of people are move to other countries just because of better future, outsourced facilities, enjoy accommodation where people are easily enjoy their life without any restriction in the form of political issue, environment instability etc.
On the other hand, It has few disadvantage, Many people who are living outside the countries. They miss their relative, families and children. While, no sources of communication can remove these gap such as Whatsapp, Facebook, Skype and so on. Even, people have tough schedule in foreign country. Ticket and Visa fees rate are instead high. So, It is quite difficult to travel with in two to three months.
To put in it nutshell, I pen down saying that there are many advantages and disadvantages to live outside. However, in my opine, Staying outside countries are more beneficial rather than disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: several reasons
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Suggestion: few disadvantages
...ility etc. On the other hand, It has few disadvantage, Many people who are living outside the...
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Suggestion: this gap; these gaps
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24924012158 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70486320481 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607902735562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.9439581533 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.4230769231 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6538461538 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.03846153846 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296835878784 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734837104322 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646299816286 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151911580384 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359750793333 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.2 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.28 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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