Dear Mr. Jameel,
Hope that this letter bestow you good health, wealth and best spirits. My name is Zara Noor and I belong to Karachi Pakistan.
I feel fun and frolic to inform you that I have successfully cleared job interview of the post of "Service Quality Analyzer" in your company. Unfortunately, I just want to acknowledged might be possible I could not join your company on dated November 15.
There are some reasons. Firstly, I had received my final year masters papers date sheet yesterday. My papers will be conduct on dated November 10, even it is my final papers so I could not take any risk because after that, I will be qualified master holder in Economics and Finance. Furthermore, my previous organization whereas, I am working who are provide me Service Quality training that could be enhance my skills regarding floor management, ambiance of company and many more. I am assure that I could implement in your company for future growth.
It is my humble request to you kindly give me one month to cover up all these things. I will thankful to you.
If you want to ask me further questions related to my joining. You can contact me on my mobile number 00241555588696.
Waiting for your positive response,
Yours sincerely,
Zara Noor.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 344, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...ious organization whereas, I am working who are provide me Service Quality training tha...
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Line 6, column 352, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...anization whereas, I am working who are provide me Service Quality training that could ...
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Line 6, column 488, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'assured'.
Suggestion: assured
...ambiance of company and many more. I am assure that I could implement in your company ...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hese things. I will thankful to you. If you want to ask me further questions re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, so, whereas, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90783410138 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81411785023 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658986175115 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1720564037 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0714285714 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268315042563 0.216113520407 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095517497754 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072194028277 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136943289062 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653215933571 0.0580467560999 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.