1. As greater numbers of people move to cities and as cities expand in size, city life loses its appeal.
2. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In many parts of the world, people are moving into cities looking for a better job and what they think will be a better life. This trend became obvious in well-developed cities, due to their wide range of offers.
The general view is that, due to this flooding of people into cities, life has its drawbacks because cities are becoming more congested and polluted, and many aspects of life are a lot more stressful. Firstly, commuting or travelling from one side of the city to the other can be a real headache, especially in the rush hours. Roads are often overcrowded leading to delays and because everyone is in an endless hurry, small accidents are happening. Secondly, pollution is a serious problem which is happening as a result to this massive wave of people who are moving into cities. The environment is suffering from this demand for factories because of the waste which is sometimes discharged in rivers and the gas is released in the air, being a real threat for people. Thirdly, accommodation is very expensive and ordinary people won't have the chance to buy their own apartment. Last but not least, usually, in big cities people won't feel safe because the crime rate is a crucial problem.
In spite all of these drawbacks, I can't argue that city life loses its appeal, at least not for the majority. Most of the people who choose to move into a larger city are doing this due to economic necessities. Earnings are far higher in cities than in the countryside, where people are farming, as an example. For others, cities are more tempting just because of the large offer of supermarkets, cinema, theatre, better educational institutions, and many more besides, which are more accessible if you live in the city rather tan in the countryside. For this kind of people city life will never lose its appeal.
All in all, city life in not losing its appeal to the majority. Most of the people will always dream for a perfect life in the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, at least, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1611.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69679300292 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55363630976 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539358600583 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1532384685 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.6875 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352658087295 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130577505981 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101624460448 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.24019400671 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957205190293 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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