1. As greater numbers of people move to cities and as cities expand in size, city life loses its appeal.
2. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In many parts of the world, people are moving into cities looking for a better job and what they think will be a better life. This trend became obvious in well-developed cities, due to their wide range of offers.
The general view is that, due to this flooding of people into cities, life has its drawbacks because cities are becoming more congested and polluted, and numerous aspects of life are a lot more stressful. Firstly, commuting or travelling from one side of the city to the other can be a real headache, especially in the rush hours. Roads are often crowded so, this leads to delays and because everyone is in a continuous hurry small accidents are happening. Secondly, pollution is a serious problem which is happening as a result to this massive wave of people who are moving into cities. The environment is suffering from this demand for factories because the waste from these is sometimes discharged in rivers and the gas released in the air, which is a real threat for people. Thirdly, accommodation is very expensive and ordinary people won't have the chance to buy their own apartment. The last, but not least, in big cities usually people won't feel safe because the crime rate is a crucial problem.
In spite all of these drawbacks, I'm not certainly sure that city life loses its appeal. Most of the people who choose to move into a larger city are doing this due to economic necessities. Earnings are far higher in cities than in the countryside, where people are farming, as an example. For others, city life is more appealing because in there they can find a range of shops. For this kind of people city life will never lose its appeal.
All in all, city life in not losing its appeal to the majority. People will always dream for a perfect life in the city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62460567823 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44285462842 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536277602524 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0444577158 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.625 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352359867822 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.135377405837 0.084324248473 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10441399322 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.250726077891 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112148728481 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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