the widespread of the internet has a mostly positive effect on the life in today's world
The technology nowadays changed life, it becomes different from the past in all aspects. Some people state that the usage of internet nowadays have many disadvantages, but in my view, as there are many negative things, there are more positive things to mention. I believe that our life much easier than our parents because we can achieve many things on the internet, which was in the past takes a long time and big effort. In this essay, I will explore more benefits of the widespread of the internet.
First of all, the using of the internet facilitates the process of getting information. Before using the internet the people were using the books to search about something, it was taking a long time in order to reach their purposes besides the effort consumed in searching between libraries for the proper source. While nowadays all the information in our hands, in one click in google website we can surf different connected links related to the search easily by the internet. My experience a compelling example of this. When my father was a student in the college before more than 40 years, he was struggling to find information about his graduation project, he was in Aeronautics major, so while there is no any manufacturer company in the Middle East, he depending on the books from different libraries in many regions to get beneficial sources so he can cover all the ideas needed to the project. On the other hand, I used in my graduation project all information from the internet. That explains how the internet can deliver valuable knowledge with short time and low effort.
In addition to that, by the internet we can install much good application, that helps to facilitate many steps in the life, like educational, entertainment, communication, and medical application, we can install them in the phone, so they portable with us and we can use them in every place. For example, educational applications like children teaching video, this app deliver a specific amount of videos daily to help children know the numbers and alphabets by attractive-colorful images. Moreover, communication applications like Facebook and Whatsup helped us to communicate with far people in the different area in a short time.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that the internet benefited us too much, by easing the process of getting information and by the application that we can use in order to spend our time in a fun way or to increase on knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 709, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...in Aeronautics major, so while there is no any manufacturer company in the Middle ...
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Line 3, column 760, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'depends'.
Suggestion: depends
...facturer company in the Middle East, he depending on the books from different libraries i...
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Line 4, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... communication, and medical application, we can install them in the phone, so the...
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Line 6, column 185, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a fun way" with adverb for "fun"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t we can use in order to spend our time in a fun way or to increase on knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 43.0788530466 97% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 52.1666666667 134% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.0752688172 173% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 413.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94430992736 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50803742585 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89778820986 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518159806295 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 655.2 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.191055228 48.9658058833 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.133333333 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5333333333 20.6045352989 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105880478041 0.236089414692 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448583949322 0.076458572812 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358855678551 0.0737576698707 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696254551043 0.150856017488 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0493592233729 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 58.1214874552 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.1575268817 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 10.9000537634 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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