A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
* make suggestions as to how they could make friends
* suggest joining clubs, particilating in school activities
* give any extra general advice
Dear Annie,
I received your letter in which you have mentioned that you joined a new school. I am glad that you finally made to your dream school but you are facing issues as the environment here is little different from your previous school. Now, you don't have to worry as I'll share a couple of advice from my experience.
As you know, I also had been to similar situation. So, I can give you few tips to fit in. I am aware that you are quite introvert. Believe or not, you have an excellent chance to drop your shyness and interact with other students. Also, be a helping hand, you can use your academic understanding in smarter way.
Furthermore, you can join various clubs at your new school. Why don't you join their basketball club? You always loved this sport. In addition to this, you can take part in various school activities in order to get noticed or recognized.
I wish you good luck for your new endeavor. I believe that you will be able to adjust once you'll feed your need for affiliation and recognition, which you always crave. And don't forget to act bold.
Yours loving,
Rhythm
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, if, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.565 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42445354668 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0792542232 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.0625 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.5 16.8248392259 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175615856742 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0713788503738 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650334635443 0.0603063233224 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1183793086 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0460835263545 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.07 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.