Dear Kenny,
I hope this letter of mine find you and your family in ravishing health. I am writing to apologize for not being able to join you for the theater programme this weekend, that we have been planning from last month. Believe me, it is embarrassing for me as well.
Unfortunately, the reason for my disability is, this Sunday, I met an accident on the road and eventually broke my leg. I was unconscious, when I was able to gather my sense and opened my eyes I was in the hospital. Doctors told me that I have a hairline fracture in my foot, so, proper treatment for it is vital and probably two weeks bed rest. I am sorry for not being able to contact you early due to my medical circumstances. However, to remove your melancholy and lifting your mood, I have a plan to watch a movie marathon at my home this weekend. I will make all the arrangements with the help of my family and you can invite a few more friends.
On the other hand, I have contacted the theater agency they can cancel our reservations and take the tickets back, also money will be refunded after cutting minimal service charges or otherwise, you can find another partner to accompany you. Hope to hear from you soon, also kindly forgive me this time.
Best Regards,
Sonia
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 937.175257732 111% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48484848485 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55311448692 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627705627706 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.5030502765 44.8134815571 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3333333333 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270607080273 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091755899664 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622166410401 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192033314747 0.12726935374 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0272434428153 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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